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dooshbag08

Member Name: dooshbag08

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Creative Writing

Date: 02/05/09 (51 review reads)
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Disadvantages: i miss him terribley

This is a poem I wrote for My grandad Tommy who passed away just before christmas 08, I wrote it for the whole family on my Dad's side and I have decided I would like to share it with you.
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Grandad Tommy

You gaveus strength,
Strength enough to treck through.
You reflected the sun in our lives,
You made us happy,
You made us laugh
You made us the family we are'''.
'''Each Visit, Each Second,
We cherish in our hearts forever.
Every memory, Every Smile,
We keep close by our sides always.'''

'''I know one day we'll see you again,
But until then, even though we can't see you,
We know you're there,
With us no matter what, Right beside us.'''
'''You alway's loved us, And we know you still do.
You always smiled for us even at the hardest time of your life.
You intended to make us happy and you did,
We are so very proud of you.
You were the light of our lives,
You are the light of our lives,
You will alway's be the light of our lives.'''

'''So smile for us, even though we can't see you,
We will sense and smile back,
And Laugh, even though we cant hear you,
We will know and laugh with you
We love you Grandad Tommy.'''

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I always find that when I write a poem to some one it makes me feel better, you should try it.

Summary: a poem :|

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Last comment:
manlybeach

- 02/05/09

Lovely tribute to your Grandad x


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