Things end sometime; Nothing lasts forever (General)

Member Name: angiebabyqueen

Product:	General
Date:	12/03/06 (182 review reads)
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Advantages: Fighting The Pains of Life and getting back up and Possibly Trusting again.

Disadvantages: Heartbreak, Heartache, Insecurities, Unhappiness, & possibly not being able to trust again

Seeing as there is a general corner with nothing to tell us what we can write about, I though that I would submit my poem that I have recently composed and hope that you enjoy it as a different section that I have entered so far on DooYoo. Any constructive criticism is welcome, and I don’t mean to offend or upset, if this is how you translate the poem the way in which you wish to. Everyone translates words of poetry differently so here goes, enjoy and adore…

Turning to me and saying,
Things end sometime, nothing lasts forever
Eats me up inside; killing
My heart in two
Like I’d never;
Heard it before but deep down I know it’s true.

Your eyes are the deepest,
Shade of harmony; brown,
Celebrate love with feasts,
Console with those,
Not in love and feeling down,
To those people, what do you propose?

Do you propose to make them happy?
Do you propose that you’ll be there,
To be at their side; snappy?
Thing is though,
Don’t forget where
Where you’ll be when things are through.

The scariest feeling of all
Is giving your heart away,
For it to be broken, for you to fall
Feeling as if you’re drowning,
Like you won’t see the light of day,
Like you’re sinking.

Sure, some relationships last forever,
Others last a second,
There will come a day where you decide whether,
You give up your true love,
And memories of your heart which are fond,
Or to fall in the trap of the dove.

Doves are a bird associated with love,
So are roses and chocolates,
So how can a feeling that sends you high above,
Can make you suicidal moments after?
So rely on your mates
To give you a dose of laughter.

And be there for your friends,
When they are in need,
For one day you’ll need one at the end,
Of a failed relationship,
When your heart decides to bleed,
After years of hugs, kisses chains and whips.

You’re scared of people leaving you,
Knowing if your heart’s broken once,
It could be broken again too,
So you find it hard to trust,
People with your heart and senses,
You then ask yourself why must;

I feel this way, feel like this,
You wish it was the start again,
Where love was blossoming with kisses,
Friendship and facts about each other,
Before the chains of love hold you in pain,
And you wonder if you’ll love another.

Those deep brown eyes of yours,
Tell me so much; lead me to another land,
Stories, fairytales and much more,
Heartache, and heartbreak in the past,
Broken from a long overstretched elastic band,
Dragged out so you can no longer adore;

The pleasures of life, the love you could have,
The trust of your heart in another person,
To take care of, to lock within a cave,
Of safety, of protection,
To let light in from the sun,
When you’re ready to arrive at your destination.

So when asking, think about,
The happiness of love can bring if you trust,
But don’t give your heart out,
To just anyone, or a stranger,
Build friendships, that nothing could bust,
Not even death or violent anger.

If you fall down in life,
Make sure you stand back up,
Brush yourself off; don’t stab at wounds with a knife,
Time heals wounds, and eventually one day,
Life will be yours, new like the birth of a pup,
And you’ll smile; look back, and to a future far away.

Angiexxx copyright 2006

Summary: fight the world when it gets you down, trust those close, be wary of others