Meadows Mistake. (Poetry)

Name: evesapples131

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Product:	Poetry
Date:	20/10/07 (52 review reads)
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Advantages: I enjoyed writing it, poetry is a good form of letting your feelings be known.

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Hello, before you read I'd like you to know that this is not a review on poetry, It is a poem I have written, I am not expecting anybody to rate it in terms of 'Useful' 'somewhat Useful' etc..... But I would like peoples honest opinions on it. Any feedback would be very much appreciatted. Thank you. Please, be honest.



Meadows Mistake.

Misty Meadow I cannot see,
Why have you captured me?
I am asking 'let me be'
Still you'll never set me free,
You are vast and you are wide,
you have tried to take my Pride,
I have darkness,
You have sight, you have power, for my light.


Misty Meadow, can't you see?
You are a part of me?
Let me flourish, then you'd see,
Forever I would be your tree.
Now I ponder,
What would be?
If you had of set me free?
You'd be hungry,
I'd be gone,
Why keep me here so long?

I am big now, I am tall,
Oh now Meadow, you look so small,
Why old Meadow, were you so cruel?
You had fire, I had fright,
You would hurt me, night by night,
You made me need you, I had no choice,
But now you'll hear my voice,
When I grew,
you failed to see,
How many more there were of me.

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