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~ Love Me, Love Me ~ (Poetry)

susie19

Member Name: susie19

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Date: 15/10/08 (331 review reads)
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Positions in Life
~*~*~*~*~*~

When I grow up I want to be
A cowgirl wand'ring wild and free
Riding fast and riding strong
Bouncing bareback all day long.

When I grow up I want to play
An instrument by night and day
I'll choose the spoons, close notes and beats
That sing ecstatic through musical sheets.

When I grow up I want to be
A missionary overseas
Seeking souls lost and enslaved
Creating deep missionary waves.

When I grow up I want to be
In uniform, police maybe
Standing proud with truncheon tall
Handcuff boys against the wall.

When I grow up I want a home
With grounds where we can freely roam
We'll picnic in the summer heat
And finish up with doggy treats.

And this home at the edge of the town
Will be a little upside down
Interlocking walls, underfloor heat
House 69, not overly sweet.

When I grow up I want to be
A woman on top, and so cheeky
But underneath or side by side
Position is queen, now let's go ride.

When I grow up I want to be
A porn star (but only in my dreams)
For loyal and true and honest and just
Forever I love you, my hubby my lust.



Thanks for reading.

Summary: Just a bit of cheeky fun.

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Last comments:
MarcoG

- 08/02/09

LOVE VERSE 4! I'm totally quoting that one day xxx
luckyarchers

- 31/01/09

What a Cheeky Girl!
carcraig

- 08/11/08

Just as good as first time round......Caroline xx

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