Writing

Hi, everyone. I am really into writing stories at the moment - I would really like to be a writer. Probably no hope but this is a story I wrote when I was ten. I have like ten million saved on my computer and when I saw this on ciao i thought i would put one of my earliest on. This is only the beginning and I'm very sorry if it's awful hope you like it though ... CHAPTER ONE - IZZY Isabella Flavia Relli Marino's whole world revolved around her Aunt and her cats. Isabella (Izzy) loved cats, it wasn't her choice to love cats, but ever since she came to her aunt, she was given a cat on her birthday. She was now 12 years old, which meant that she had ...  Read the complete review

Writing is and always has been more than a passing passion for me. It is a deep, almost instinctive need - just as essential for my day to day existence as breathing. As soon as I was old enough to hold a pen and make intelligible shapes resembling something like letters, the words have been tumbling out. Sometimes these words have been worth reading, and sometimes not. I have always essentially written for myself, and other people's opinions on what I've had to say have been of little consequence, although of course it's a bonus and a great confidence-booster when someone has enjoyed anything I've written. My first attempts at publication were ...  Read the complete review

This is the first chapter of a story I've been writing and any comments would be truly welcome. It's the first I've really tried to write that isn't fan-fic, and although friends tell me that it's ok friends judgements are rarely unbiased! So yeah, here goes. Path to Redemption Chapter 1 In the Dark Her gloved hand reached out to turn the handle of the front door, but even before the dark leather touched the cold metal she knew something was wrong. Deathly wrong. And she prayed that it wasn't what she'd been running from for the past 9 years. She froze, shaking, and suddenly very cold, she'd only been out of the house for an hour, ...  Read the complete review

Okay, I know this is really cheesy but I wrote it quite a while ago and I remember that I was trying to write something resembling a John Woo style but it came out all wrong. But comments are appreciated even if they are bad. 1. EXT ROAD - (LOS ANGELES) - AFTERNOON A Birds eye view reveals two cars on a main highway. One seems be chasing the other in a game of cat and mouse. The two cars are dodging through other vehicles at high speeds. A loud roar sounds as a car rushes around the corner just missing TWO PAEDESTRIANS as they cross the street. The TWO PAEDESTRIANS quickly rush to the sidewalk on the other as the chasing vehicle swerves ...  Read the complete review

this might be a bit of a laugh. I want to try and train my writing skills by writing a short story, as i have never really tried this before (check my humourous attempt "what annoys me? find out!" for the only other, although it is based on fact.) Unfortunatly due to todays tv based culture my mind is blank, and so i am asking my friends here at dooyoo for help. I propose to write a short story with your help, which i will post when done for those who helped to read. I want you to help by giving me one word. One word that i then have to include in the story. This can be anything from a character name to a colour to a crazy word that your trying to ...  Read the complete review