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I love reading travel reviews, I love writing them too!
This review considers writing about destinations, rather than specific airlines and hotels.
We have a large but finite number of travel destinations but an infinite number of ways of seeing them. Any person going to any place has their own experience, so that place is a different place to every visitor.
For me a good travel review has to include two main things.
1. Why is this place unique in itself?
2. What was my experience that made it unique to me?
My viewing of the Taj Mahal did not change the Taj Mahal. (It still stands as one of the most beautiful sights in the world.) It changed me! My perception of it made it unique again. Your perception of it will make it unique again. Ad infinitum.
So in my view, if you want to write a decent travel review, you need to describe the place and it's effect on you. Simple!
Or perhaps not.....
~~~Other things to think about.~~~
1. Where is it?
If you are writing about a fabulous restaurant you went to in Splickensplackenburgh-auf-den-Miltgrob, you need to tell me roughly where Splickensplackenburgh-auf-den-Miltgrob is! The best restaurant in the world is no use to me if I haven't got the foggiest idea where it is. Locate the place by city and country for the less travelled amongst us. Don't assume we know where it is just because you've had your tea there!
2. How do you get there?
I might, on the strength of your review, be desperate to visit the Temple of the One Eyed Gnu, in Phlampoogia. My perception of it would be altered if you forgot to mention that I had to walk for three days through a rainforest to get to it! A quick mention of it's accessability goes a long way! (no pun intended!)
3. What is the weather like?
I went twice to Luxor in Egypt. The first time I was there it poured down! If I didn't go on to say that that was the first rain they had had there for six years and it only lasted twenty minutes, then people would be packing their wellies and umbrellas! Which would be novel but not very helpful.
4. Is it safe there?
If there are hazards such as malarial mosquitos, mention it! If it is a place that you would happily take a 'babe in arms' to, mention that too! Peoples' perception of how safe they will be will affect their planning. It would be a major flaw in your review writing if you looked out of your hotel window, saw a massive street gang torching a McDonalds and only mentioned that you got an overcooked McFatburger there one night!
5. What are the locals like?
Are they friendly? Do they speak your language? Will they consider themselves entitled to have sex with you if you show a bit of leg? Are there any left or have they all been driven out by hordes of English Holidaymakers?
Mixing with the locals and learning from them is a major part of many travellers wishes when holidaying. So it's important to say how you found them. The locals can make or break a holiday. It is their place you are invading, so it's important to say how you got on with them.
6. What are the major attractions in the area?
Visiting Niagara and moaning that the sound of running water drowned out the TV programme you were watching in the hotel lobby, might just be missing the point of being in Niagara!
If there is something that you found amazing to experience, tell us! Many people might just have a short time to visit one place, so knowing the best things to see and do in that time is vital.
7. What's the food like?
Is it fabulous? Will I put on two stone in weight? Do I need to take ten packets of Immodium Super Extra Extra Super Strength because the hygeine standards would embarass a warthog? Can I get a bacon butty when I am tired of eating roasted goat? Food is pretty important to us travellers.
It's not just about the food either, it's useful to put in local habits and customs around eating. I was in the back of beyond in Morocco once and a friend I was with got into serious trouble because he couldn't get used to eating just using his right hand! (Some cultures consider eating with the left hand as unclean)
8. What was your accomodation like?
How much was it roughly? Was it quiet? Do you get a bed? Sheets? Shared bathroom? Would you stay there again? I woke up one morning in an hotel in Portugal to find men taking the roof off my room! Minor events like that should be mentioned!
9. Who might want to go there?
Not everybody is able bodied. It would be stupid of me to extol the virtues of Mogilev in Belarus if I failed to mention that the pavements are so bad that moving around in a wheelchair is impossible.
Any place that you review, think about who would be happy here and who would not! Many teenagers would be bored witless by six hours of compulsory folk dancing viewing in Andoveriaupdenbighill. Athletic surfer types aren't necessarily going to go into ecstasy at the prospect of trundling around a knitwear museum. Think about who it would or wouldn't suit.
Obviously, not all of these things will be necessary to put in all reviews but I hope I have given you some insight into what makes a travel review 'good' from my point of view. If I have missed anything vital, please let me know and I will add it in!
Now, get writing! (Because we have all been somewhere interesting!)
We visited Euro Disney on 4th January for 5nights 6 days. We travelled from Ashford via Eurostar which was completley hassle free. We parked up in a secure car park and from level 5 you have direct accessto the terminal. After going through passport control etc there is a departure loung which has toys for the children to play with. The journey was comfortable and seat room very spacious. On arrival we made our way to the Santa Fe hotel and even though we shouldn't off een there until 3pm they had a room free at 11 and we checked in. It was very comfortable not very spacious but just what you needed. The parks where ver busy at the weekend but by the Tuesday i quietened off. We booked a character meal before we went and this saved about 50% due to the euro being poor. The kids and us loved it, there was no rush to get us out and we spent 2 hours with the characters who came to our table and every other one.
The hotel itself was clean and tidy, continental breakfast with lots of choice and everyone packed up for luch from breakfast.
The disney sale starts 6th Jan make the mos of it fantastic bargains.
advise: it is very cold and take ski clothing we didn't and we froze, it snowed for the 5 days, it was fantastic for the holiday but we had to keep going back to get warm.
There is a auchan supermarkct open monday to saturday one stop on the metro, for heap food as in disney and the hotels the food is very expensive (£23 for fish and chips) each.
When it's time to come home don't go to the check in to early they won't open it a minute early and again it's cold.
I love reading and writing here on Dooyoo. My favourite category for both reading and writing has to be the travel section. I love to travel and my friends would say I'm always talking about my next travel plans. Before I give my thoughts on what makes a really good travel review I want to say that it is just my opinion, others may have other ideas!
When I read a travel review I want to feel I am actually in the place I am reading about and by the time I finish the review I expect to have a fair bit of knowledge about the place I am reading about. When I write a travel review I usually start the review by telling the reader exactly where it is I am reviewing-sounds obviously but I have read lots of travel reviews where I get half way through the review and am still not sure exactly where the place is in the world! A brief opening paragraph really helps to set the scene!
I think the next paragraph should tell the reader the different travel options for getting to the place you are reviewing. I also like to know how I will be able to get around once I'm there, what is the public transport system like? Will I need to hire a car? Give your own experiences wherever you can. It is difficult to give accurate prices for flights so a rough idea can be helpful. If you found a bargain, reliable car Hire Company share it!
Next I like to paint a picture of the place I am reviewing. This will include what there is to do especially any personal recommendations. I like to give a description of the scenery with any highlights. It is useful to write briefly when to visit too, this may sound obvious but can be really useful! I have reviewed the Tucson area and wanted to give an accurate description of what to expect as far as the weather went!
If you know of any good walks it is useful to mention them, giving information about how suitable they are for families or those with disabilities. I like to give personal details such as where you can park and the cost.
I think it is important to give information about accommodation and places to eat out. We usually rent a house when we travel, however I like to say which hotels I have seen that look good! Personal recommendations on places to eat can be very useful. I like to include places to buy picnic food, as this is what we tend to do when we travel.
Overall the most important thing for me when writing a travel review is to write about my own experiences. I can read general facts in any travel book or on the web site. Having said that sometimes a potted history can be interesting as long as it's potted!
Finally a good review needs to be written without lots of spelling mistakes or grammatical errors. If you are not brilliant at spelling then use a spell check! I look forward to reading and writing lots more travel reviews on this site in the future!
Travel reviews are one of those areas where good writers will come to prominence as they can really let their creative style shine through, when I read a travel review I not only want a decent amount of factual information such as cost and the facilities available at a resort or the punctuality of an airline I also want to be taken on a trip by the writer and to get a feel for the destination.
A lot depends on what particular aspect of travel you are reviewing, with hotels and airlines it is the service combined with the cost and in the case of a hotel facilities that are important and for me cleanliness and the type of guests the place attracts are also important factors I want to read about. With modes of transport safety and comfort are key features and how they deal with any problems that you may encounter.
With a destination it is facilities and what sort of attractions are close by and overall what sort of traveller it is suitable, adventurous, families, quiet, lively nightlife, that sort of detail should be included to help someone make a buying decision.
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Hi there, i spend a lot of time traveling for no other reason than, I LIKE IT!!! my most recent holiday was a package holiday to sharm el sheik, Egypt.
I arrived 1 feb, and it was 22* c, it was lovely. the whole sea is national park, and is the red sea reviera, the place thrives with fish and as a result snorkeling and diving are a must. The sea is filled with undisturbed coral and fish. ( lemon shark, blow fish ect) There are hundreds of different companys offering the same trips but it is a must when in egypt. prices range from around £18 - £45, so be careful. If your lucky the guides will even take your underwater camera and dive to create some wonderful picsa just for you. All in all the place was beautiful, the people were wonderful, the atmasphere was fantastic, the activities were unriveled and i will be a return visitor, no doutb about it!
Camp du pylone, Antibes, have stayed there many many times over the past 5 years and seen lots of good improvements, although little needed, found this site through the internet www.brownsword-mobilehomes-nice.net Their charges start from £160 per mobile per week. Full photos of the vans on the web site so you see what you get. I found them to be very clean and are clearly updated each year. certainly recommend them
We should have anticipated the long coach journey but nothing prepares you . We set off at 2.10 am and arrived at 8pm. The coach driver who took over near Dover coughed most of the way and regularly swayed to the hard shoulder. There was no co-driver or courier so Bob must have been even more relieved than we were when we reached the destination.
The destination of St Georghausen was a surprise as the Travelscope brochure for the "Twixmas Rhine Cruise" had promised Boppard. We glimpsed brightly lit Boppard on the way to St Georghausen which was fast asleep.
Our tour guide, Maria, said hello at the ship and accompanied us when we took the optional trip the next day to Cochem. It was a great relief when Maria stopped talking as her knowledge of the area was limited to reading snippets from a brochure but she filled in with her opinions on such things as immigration in England. Maria led community singing on the way back with "Where have all the flowers gone..." A cheery end to the excursion.
We paid £80 extra for our cabin on the promenade deck so were disappointed that the shower area stank. I asked for assistance from both Reception and the cleaner. They merely offered a spray to temporarily cover the smell. Each time we opened the shower area door the sour smell pervaded the cabin.
The brochure promises a gala party night. Many passengers dressed up for the occasion and were disappointed to find the live entertainment was the same as on the other nights - Andy playing an organ. The tour guides made no attempt to make a party happen.
The music museum at Rhuddesheim is well worth a visit. If you go independently the entrance price is 5.50 Euros each. If you go as part of an optional excursion then the price is £15 per person but includes a short trip on the "Noddy Train" and a mug of Gluwein.
Why do coach journeys abroad seem to always include stops at the grottiest sheds selling beers and wines? Our coach driver seemed to be the only person keen to buy!
The trip as a whole was interesting experience but I would think twice about spending two whole days of a four day holiday on a coach again. I hope for the sake of the next passengers that the smelly cabin gets sorted. I would also be willing to pay more for the driver to have a co-driver or at least a travel guide other than Maria with him in case of illness or the possibility of him going over his set hours for driving without a rest.
We have just returned from the Hotel Jupiter in Alcudia after spending 2 weeks there.
Lovely place but prepare yourself for a lot of noise!! Every night selfish people return to their rooms at all hours (this starts from 11pm) loud and show no consideration for anyone else or young children. Twice there was trouble on our floor and security was called - reception were very good and gave the culprits a warning or they were out! Rooms are very small for familes and our floor was only swept once. Beds are changed twice a week and clean towels were supposed to be given every 3 days-yeah right!! we had to ask for clean towels!
Lifts are an absolute nightmare waited ages for them and there is only one large lift for your luggage!
Onto the good parts- food was great and plenty of it - lots of selections avaliable and bar staff were really helpful too once they understood what you wanted-large selection of drinks although no Baileys or bitters!!
Entertainment ok and plently to do in the evenings. No problems with sunbeds as loads always avaliable no matter what time you surfaced! Great location too nice walks also free bus to and from beach every 30 mins!
Would we go back? No is the honest answer as this place is like Butlins in the sun!!!! Not my cup of tea!
4 STARS Soleil plage is in a magnificent site, along the Dordogne river (canoeing, fishing, swimming on the beach) in front of an impressive cliff, in a green landscape full of trees and meadows.
Either you are in a camping pitch, a mobile-home or a chalet, you can meet in the centre called "the village" with its fountain, its beautiful flowers, restaurant from simple to "grande cuisine", take-away, bar, terrasses, minimart and a welcoming multilingual RECEPTION which was allowed this year, the price "l'etoile d'OR of the best camping du SUD OUEST". Plenty to do inside, sports-wise, aquatic park entertainment and outside in this CASTLE COUNTRY, middle-age towns and villages and markets, Neolithic caves, golf, balloon, accrobranche, bicycle, hiking. So easy to fly from many English cities with low cost Ryan air & FLYBE to Bergerac, where you could hire a car.
First time for me, but I have already booked fro 2006 because the high season is almost full.
No surprise : the region is invaded by BRITS...
We stayed here Sept 05. Is quite a drive from Oban-about 3 miles, so you would need transport, although I did see a bus stop right outside the gates. Is fairly cheap-£11 per night for 2 people & 1 tent, and has a camping cooking area.
the campsite has beautiful views, and has a slight wind all the time, as near the sea, so keeps the midges away.
The showers are a bit dangerous if you are not able bodied, and you have to pay 20p to use the hairdryer, which runs out just when you need it!
There is an outside washing up area with warm/hot water.
I would go again because of the area.
there is no bar on site, so take your own booze!
Unless you are secretly an elephant, and as such have a fantastic memory, if you want to write a decent travel op you might well have to do some work while you're away. Unlike a book or a film, you can't just re-read or re-watch a trip, and hard as I've tried, taking a museum, town or country back home with you doesn't really work. For this reason I've split this op into two sections - what you need to do while you're wherever you're writing about, and what you need to do when you get home again. WHILE YOU'RE THERE: While I'd suggest you jot things down while you're away. I don't expect you to walk through a museum or sit at a table in a restaurant making notes the whole time. Back at the hotel while your other half's in the bath is fine, because if you've paid attention during the day, the details will still be fresh in your mind. I keep a diary all year round, and have done for years. I can tell you what I did on this day last year (I was in the UK between trips, eating vegetarian bacon like it was going out of fashion) but I can also tell you exactly what I thought of Pisa's tower last November, and my first impressions of Slovakia the summer before last. I wouldn't go so far as to say you should all take up journal keeping immediately, but an old note book and a couple of pens when you're away never go amiss. Each night, make a note of anything special that's happened to you that day, be it funny, strange or down right embarrassing, and by the time you come back you'll already have the makings of a great op. It's the anecdotes, in my opinion, that bring opinions to life, after all the Louvre has had the same paintings in it for decades, and if someone wanted to see a listing of works there I'm sure they could find it on the internet somewhere, but what they won't find is a warning to "wear sturdy shoes if you have them with you. The overly pol
ished floors in the east wing especially can lead to some embarrassing incidents for stiletto wearers rushing from exhibit to exhibit". Don't waste time writing down the opening times and admission prices for everywhere you visit. I'm not saying they're not important, but this info can usually be found on one of the many free leaflets they have at the entrance. Pop one of these in your bag for later reference, and even if they don't have an English version, pick one up - assuming the country in question uses our alphabet, you can usually work it out. WHEN YOU GET BACK: Some things to think about. * Should you *really* be writing this? Do you know the place or monument or airline inside out? Are you sure you won't be able to find out more in the upcoming months? I'd been in Heidelberg for over 10 months and knew quite a bit about the place, but I didn't write my opinion until July, because I just knew I'd have even more to say by then. If you've visited Vienna and Salzburg, do you really think you're equipped to write an op on "Austria in general"? Maybe two separate ones on each city would be better. Similarly, if you did a whirlwind tour of Europe 3 years ago, and spent only one day in Milan, never having returned since, are you sure you know the city well enough to be telling the rest of us what to expect? * If you can't remember, forget! Ever the user of the clearest sentences on the planet, I think I'd better explain this one. This time last week I was in Ibiza. We went out for a lunch at a place down by the sea, but I wasn't fully awake so I didn't notice the name, or much of what was on the menu apart from what I ordered. I also didn't pick up the bill, so I've no idea how much a meal for 2 came to. Though it was a charming place, with pleasant staff and delicious food, it's not getting a mention in my fort
hcoming op on the island. Why? Because from a reader's point of view there's nothing I find more irritating than statements along the lines of "I went to this gorgeous little restaurant about 5 minutes walk from the hotel but I can't remember the name". Throw in a "and they did good pasta but I can't remember what else they had on offer" and an "I think the prices were ok but I didn't really look" and you'll find me off screaming in a corner somewhere. Just what is the point in saying any of that? No one, not even those living in resort would be able to find the place in question after that "description", so why bother including it? You can't just pop back on holiday to look up the details, so if you cannot remember the vital bits, forget about including it. * Write about what you are meant to be writing about You want to write a review of a city? That's lovely, but bear in mind what the important word is here: "city". It's not a review of your flight or ferry ride over, nor a write up of the hotel you stayed in. These are all good things to review, but in the correct category, not here. That being said, people might want to know some good places to eat. While we don't want a full restaurant review in this category, mentioning a few names is ok, as is listing a website you found really useful: "The Good Food France Guide has an array of listings for this city, plus clear directions on how to get to each restaurant. We found the ones we tried to be just as described on the site, so it's well worth a look." * Prove you've been there On a site I shall not name I once perfomed a little experiment: I wrote a travel op on a place I've never been, basing the info on general knowledge and two useful, widely visited travel sites. Not a single person picked up on this, and some even praised me for me thoughtful and usefu
l account..... Anyone can read a guidebook or visit a site, so the point of a travel op, again, just in my opinion, is to add the things these don't tell you. For example, say you're staying in a large, widely visited hotel. In this case it's the "insider-info" that is of most use: "When you make your booking at the Xaloc apartments, request number 12 on the 3rd floor - it's a corner apartment that gives you a view of the sea and the pool, but since it's at the back you avoid the noise from the main road which most other rooms suffer from". Stuff like that, that only someone who has been there would know. * Be relevant and up to date I have been known, on more than one occasion, to write opinions on places I visited a week ago, but also those from visits a month or year ago. This isn't always a bad thing, but make sure your facts are up to date. No one cares that it used to be open 9am to 10pm 7 days a week if it's since started opening only in the afternoons at weekends. Also, although you might have seen the best El Greco exhibition ever, if it's since moved on this is of little use to people about to visit the place in question. (For the record, the El Greco's not particularly bon, and seems to be following me around the continent at the moment, in a not very nice, actually quite scary way). * Appreciate how facts can add to an op, but don't over do it There are some things would be travelers are bound to want to know. Typical flying time from the UK, for instance. Time difference. Important local customs: "Being a Muslim country, walking around the city center in nothing but your bikini and flip-flops is not to be recommended, no matter how hot it is. However, there are similarly a number of facts that just clog up travel opinions, and serve" no useful purpose. The population, for example. Unless you have something specific to say, for example if y
ou stayed in the remotest of remote places ("Sa Caleta is so small you soon realize that the hotel waiter is also the local taxi driver and airport customs officer. This really adds to the charm of the place") then leave them out. Remember you're writing predominantly for a British audience. Over here the Germans can get a bit obsessed - I'm constantly being asked the population of my home town, to which I have to answer that I just don't have a clue. It's not something I've been brought up to be bothered about, so telling me that you lovely little fishing village in Spain has a population of 26 000 means nothing to me. The same applies to the size of any country / town. * Finish with some web resources if you can Hopefully you've inspired people to thing about the place you're been talking about (if it's a positive op!). So why not add a link or two as a further reading resource for them? Not only that, add your own (brief!) views on them: "I did a lot of research on the net before our trip, and these 2 sites were the ones I found the most helpful" is so much more useful then "I just searched Yahoo and these were the top 5 sites though I've not visited them so I've no idea if they'll be of use to anyone". ** Don't forget, the usual "how to write" garb applies here too - spell check, read through before you post, be relevant, yadda, yadda, yadda. I don't need to tell you it all again, right? ** I love travel ops, and I'm much more likely to browse this category than, say, the food one, but I have to resort to other areas now and then because not enough people write about their holidays. Hotels. Airlines. Theme parks. Whole countries. I enjoy reading about them all, and any problems you encounter are just part of the fun reading experience if you dig schadenfreude as I do. So please, please people, start writing more of them, o
The travel category is a busy one, especially in summer, of course, when everyone and their grandmother, dog (or giraffe) go on holiday and on coming back feel the urge to share their experiences with the poor sods who had to stay at home.
One dooyooer even confessed to having written the introduction for her travel opinion (op) already at home before setting off at all! That's what I call dedication.
Most writers never read 'How to...' ops, they just type along and tell us what they've seen on the other side of the fence, it they're naturally gifted, it's OK, my advice is not for them, it's for the hesitant, the doubtful and the ones who've already tried their hands at travel ops, but aren't content with their achievements and who'd like to play in a higher league.
May I take it for granted that you know the basics about writing ops at all? If not, please check Home > Internet > Information > Reference > dooyoo.co.uk, all in all there are 2710 ops to date. I don't want to repeat what has been said many times and said very well indeed.
Contrary to what was said in the last dooyoo newsletter there are still crowns to be got for travel ops, good girl Katie has seen to that. Praised be she! Ops on countries in general are exempt at the moment, though, but Katie is doing her best to get them included again. Thursday is crowning day for travel ops in case you want to know.
You're writing on dooyoo.co.uk, i.e. for British readers, is that what you think? Ah, be careful, the net is open for everybody and there are foreigners reading here as well. And if you think you can plagiarise an op on a part of the world a Brit is unlikely to ever get to, you might be negatively surprised! ( btw, Brits get everywhere, don't you know?)
Some time ago I came back from a walk through the vineyards near Stuttgart, a city in Germany,
opened my laptop and read an op describing in greatest detail exactly the walk I had just taken. Naturally I asked the writer at once who he was, where he lived, how he could know an area so well not even many Germans know about. No answer. I tried again twice, because I was really curious, I thought of meeting this interesting chap, but when the silence continued, I became suspicious, googled the op and landed right in epinions.com!
An equally no-no thingy is to compile a text, the word 'opinion' can't be used here, from the net, books or leaflets without knowing the place personally. I've read one on a country, I can only say a school-book on geography is more thrilling, and one on a heart-wrenching memorial, but without one personal remark. I couldn't find it on google, so I assume it was a mixture of texts from a brochure. Dooyoo is about OPINIONS, so if you haven't got any, you'd better not write at all. The fact that you get VU ratings for whatever you post on dooyoo is, sadly, no argument for an op like this.
You should know the country/area/town you describe REALLY WELL; it's not enough to have travelled through a city and looked out of the window of a coach, more dead than alive because of a hangover and taken in the info of the guide with only half an ear. When you come back home and simply write down what you remember without doing any research on the net, your op isn't worth much. Does it matter where you put a castle or a museum, does it matter what a memorial is called, how many zoos a city has? Yes, it does. It's not cool to write, "Sorry, don't recall the name at the mo' and can't be arsed to look it up."
Of course it can happen that a mistake slips in, what then? If an attentive reader finds it and points it out, the writer can write 'Thank you' and correct it as indeed some writers do. I can't understand an insol
ent reaction of the kind, "Who are you to tell me what is right and what is wrong? Look at the many VUs I've already got, these people must have known why they've rated like that." As I've already pointed out, VUs don't necessarily mean what they should; lots of ops have been written on the problem of rating.
Beware of generalisations, especially when you describe places in countries whose language you don't know. Give us your observations, but be v v careful with deductions! Please.
I've begun with the dont's, because I think it's nicer to end positively than negatively.
You're pawing your hooves impatiently, you want to get going and think it's high time you got an answer to the question: what should a brill travel op be like then?
There are different ways of writing: the personal one, the more formalistic one and a combination of the two.
In the personal account the writer tells us what they did, saw, thought and felt when on holiday abroad, it's like a letter to friends. 'Formalistic' means that the writer has a pattern into which they put their information, they can write subheadings to emphasise it; you wouldn't write a letter like this, it would be too impersonal, too formal. The same pattern can be used for different travel ops, it can be a help because you don't forget things that way.
No matter which way you prefer you should cover the same things.
"For out of the abundance of the heart the mouth speaketh." (Matthew 12, 34) Yes, but please don't jump straight into the subject, tell us first where in the world the place is you lead us to, if it's not a famous city or a well-known region. I've read intimate descriptions of eateries and have been introduced to the best travel guide of the area without knowing where exactly in the world I was! If it's off the
trodden path, you should mention how we can get there so that we can follow your steps if we want to.
You can mention the accommodation and how you liked it, but not in too great detail, if there's much to say about the place where you stayed you'd better write an extra op. If there is no category for it, you can send an email to Katie@dooyoo.co.uk and ask her to put one up.
We're not at uni here, please keep that in mind when you come to background information. You don't have to begin in the Stone Age, but some info on the history of the place may be welcome. It's not forbidden to do some research work for this part of your op.
The same is true when you describe the sights, you have to find the middle way between "the temple is nice/interesting" (There's a fine of 3p for each of these words, they're hollow and meaningless!) and an essay describing every detail of all the capitals of all the columns of the temple. If you describe one sight or many, depends on the place you've been to, but I think it's better not to pack too much into one op, you're not writing a guide book. You can always write an extra op on a museum or a monument if you feel there's really much to say. Make clear why you're describing a sight, what it is you like, what impresses you especially because what you're writing is an OPINION.
The following part of your op can be on the nightlife, current events and/or attractions in the vicinity.
The last para can contain useful information on visa, currency, necessary vaccinations, recommended time of travel, etc.
My way of writing travel ops is different, I'm not saying it's better; writers are different personalities and so are readers, the same style doesn't appeal to everyone. As my style seems to appeal to some readers, I'd like to explain it, if someone wants to copy it, they'
re welcome. Where did I get it from? Dunno, it just came over me! (Maybe like manna from heaven?!)
When I write about a place I've been to, I'm there again when I'm writing, I repeat my walk through a city in my imagination and take my readers with me. I imagine a group of likeminded, intelligent guys who either share my interests or are open for my suggestions. I incorporate the subjects I've mentioned above, but try not to present them in a neutral, more in an opinionated way.
When I write an op with the title 'One Day In ...', I describe how a day is best filled, when to visit what, when and where to sit down, relax and eat something. When there's too much to see and it becomes clear that we can't 'do' everything together, I divide the group so-to-speak and send people with an interest in X to a museum where they can see X, others who might want to do Y, are advised to do Y somewhere else while I go with those who've always wanted to see Z to the site where they can see it. At the end of the day we all meet and share our experience.
With this 'trick' I can stick to the 'One Day In...' structure, but put in more information than one person could possibly gather (and digest) in a day.
I don't molest my imaginary fellow travellers with my personal disposition, I'm only the guide and stay in the background. While I'm writing I'm thinking of my own reaction, would I like to hear about the guide's health problems? No, I wouldn't and so I assume my fellow travellers/readers wouldn't, either. I like putting in an anecdote or two, though, because I like hearing them myself; on the whole the tone of the op should be light, of course only where it is appropriate, unfortunately there are places in this world where it is not.
My bestest advice comes at the end: when you've typed the op, don̵
7;t post it at once, let it sit and 'mature', at least for a day! If it's good today, it'll also be good tomorrow and if it isn't good today, it can be improved tomorrow. You might find and eliminate howlers like: "(name of a French town) used to belong to Italy so there is lots of naked statues, and red flowers that bloom in the bushes."
Think of it, maybe you should leave such a howler in!
Why haven't YOU written a travel op yet? Yes, you, no need to turn round, there's nobody standing behind you. Come on, 'fess up!
I write great travel opinions, that certainly is my forte on Dooyoo. I usually don't like to give out my recipes but I will do so in the best interest of the Dooyoo community. Most of you have gotten wise to the fact that I live vicariously through an imaginary character, an american locomotive driver called "Cammij". I have always been enamored with America, my mum says that my grandfather may have been an American (I am more certain of my grandmother and her eagerness to drop her knickers for a few bob for the American Doughboys). I am a fifty year old Fish and Chips shop manager living in a council flat with my mum near Kings Cross Station. I am a trainspotter and actually have published a couple books on BR. But still I want to be this enigma called Cammij, for instance lkast week I saw a spotter reading my first book on BR and I approached him and asked what he thought of the book and he said that the author was a senseless Git who should be laid across the rails. I meekly apologized to the nasty bloke and cowered away. I know that my FrankenCammij would have smashed him across the face as he is the working man's James Bond, a man who solves all his problems with unrefined violence and brutality. A man who knows how to talk to women too. My alter Ego. I wish I could drive locomotives in Wyoming and have sex with women of all races in America, but I am afraid to fly and Mum needs me about the house, so I don't get to travel much, actually not much, but never. I ride the tube now and then and take a holiday up to Rosslyn chapel since I wish I were a Freemason, but not travelling doesn't prevent me from writing excellent travel opinions. I know a lot of you have read this much and decided that Jim MacBride (my real name) is what happens when working class people are let into smart places. And I can detect your Kensington drawls in your caustic & Sarky comments as you ridicule me. But here is the recipe of a great tr
avel opinion. 1. Pick a place that nobody else has already covered. How many generic opinions on Berlin or Dublin's Temple Bar can we need on Dooyoo? Dooyoo's advantage over the print media and other travel sites is that it is organic and the staff will accomondate your request for a topic if it doesn't exist. So if I wanted to write about Cheyenne, Wyoming or Caspar, Wyoming I could e-mail the staff and they would make it up for me. 2. Expose the dark side of the moon, show us something new and unique. We can all use a mouse and find dull cookie cutter opinions that talk about dining and accomondations and attractions. In all likelihood when a person reads an op on a travel destination they already know whats there and their travel agent has found them a place to stay. So instead tell about the best place to find a Bulgarian hooker in Taranto, which Swedish girl is the easiest barmaid in Prague and the best place to score some crack rock or Grass in Orlando. People who read my opinions genuinely appreciate the information I give about the "otehr side of the tracks". 3. Don't lose the forest while looking at the trees. Sometimes the general cultural context is lost when minimalizing the scope of the opinion and not covering the general population. For instance if I were to write about Utah I would talk about what splendid folks those Mormons are, but I would also do my duty and remind you that the typical American is a gun toting barbarian who wants to argue about Ireland or the movie Braveheart when he has a moment of glory when he detects a British accent in your speech. 4. Tell people how much everything costs. Lots of opinions and sites are very guarded about appearing as though money matters to anyone. Money matters to me, I am only making 15,000 quid a year and need my Dooyoo miles to pay my piped TV bill, you damn well better believe I want to know how much a decent sack of crisps cost in Manh
atten or how much a Turkish prostitue in Larnaca who isn't too smelly will cost. I love Dooyoo and people like Ophelia and Weeze since they cross the line of "what happens when working class people are let into smart places" and tell us what things cost when we travel. People the world over are fascinated by what thuings cost in other places. I know I am at least. At least I like to envy these other places that have cheap pints. 5. Make fun of every other place and remind the readers that for some reason when our kindred Saxon people spread all over the world that our own ancestors made the right choice to stay on our little grey clump of hills in the cold North Sea. For instance if you are writing about Crete, try to balance their beauty and weather with comments about skin cancer and an over [population of German tourists. 6. Give links to other sites. Particulary useful are directories and "fun sites" that go further in depth about a destination, and simply are more depraved and vulgar than what the Dooyoo staff will tolerate. 7. Give good travel info, tell what charters and airlines you have used to get there and expound on their merits and shortcomings, do they let you get sloppy drunk in air? Do the stewardesses (I know the PC term in flight attendant but I like to call them Stewardesses) let you paw them? People like to know what the flights are like.
Dream a little dream of me. The Mammas and the Pappas. Strange that anyone should really be telling another individual how to write an opinion, as then surely its not their opinion, but more of a type cast, set in stone, monotonous piece of heartless writing. Or maybe this should be titled “How I, repeat, I, like to write a travel review!” then it is not so patronising, and more of an insight into how my mind works, and how, if at all, I can influence you in any way. I love to be entertained, and think of travelling as an adventure. I have visited 80 different countries, all the continents, and some places, such as Gibraltar, as many as ten times. My love for travelling came about from reading books by an author known as Gerald Durell, who wrote a series of books portraying his childhood on Corfu, right the way through to his Zoo building exploits on Jersey, including the expeditions he made to such startling countries as Madagascar, where he found the Ring-Tailed Lemurs, Cameroon, where he befriended the Don, and many, many over countries, each one made into a fabulous, almost Knight of the round table style, adventure. This influenced my beliefs and the way I now write travel ops, both here on Dooyoo, and across the water, at Ciao. Right, now that I have explained where I am coming from, let me carry on and explain how I structure them, if you could call it structure. JOURNEY I try and give you an introduction into how I managed to get to the place. If I flew, I will say a small amount about the airport maybe, or the flight, or even the ease of arrival. The same goes if I drive or sail, I try and explain in storyteller fashion, so that you can visualise what I am experiencing, and even picture the journey in your mind. An example of this can be found in my Cherbourg op, for instance, where I explain what I see from the windscreen of the car as I pull out of the ferry’s hol
d. If the journey itself is the adventure, then I would go into a lot more detail about what the journey has to offer, again, my P&O ferries op, where the night crossing was fantastic, like a disco at sea! I don’t always write in the same style, and try to diversify, to increase my readers and also to appeal to a wider audience. THE PLACE/DESTINATION An important part of your review/story is that of where you are and where you are staying. Here, I try and give you a first impression, before moving on to the detailed breakdown of the accommodation and the area as a whole. In order to understand my workings, and not have to read too deeply into the meaning, I try and help you to visualise by writing what is in my mind, thus allowing you to share my thoughts, and my memories. In my Panama City beach op for instance, I dream back to how the sand bellow my feet was like cotton wool, and how the sea encompassed my body with warmth like a mother, etc, feelings that I had and want you to try and empathise with my feelings, be there with me, in a way, and I hope that I can help you understand what it would be like to be standing on the beach alongside me. If I had to coin a phrase, I would say I write like a pop up book, and every time you turn a page, I hope to jump out at you, rather than be an analytical travellers guide, of which, sadly, there are many. EXPLORING You absolutely must, must, must explore the place and give an insight into what you saw. I do this by casting my mind back to when I first turned that corner and saw the monkey on top of my chalet (Mombassa) or the shanty shack in Guadeloupe. I visualise walking towards the object and reliving the day, in my own mind. I try and put the emotion of the experience into play, and characterise the people, to let them also become part of the story. I try to up tempo the joyous events, and downplay the horrific side’s of s
uch country’s, like the dead baby being flung into my taxi by a street beggar in Karachi, Pakistan. I also like to try and describe the landscape in a panoramic fashion, allowing other minds to scan the whole picture, making their own mind map of what the scenery is like, and visualise his or herself walking along the beach, or maybe sitting in a Moorish monastery, sipping mead from small clay pots. Again, I try and wake the mind up to the feelings that surround me at the time. EXPERIENCE I try to add as much information about cafes, restaurants, bars and shops into the story without flooding it and making it just another “guess where I have been?” and “guess what I did?” opinion, as I don’t believe they help anyone or that they are even enjoyable to read. Sure, they give me stacks of basic information, but a menu is a menu, until you have tasted the food. I believe that there are many good guides to places, most available from all leading book shops and some even available free of charge on the internet, but there are so few books like My Family and Other Animals, Gerald Durell, which take you to the heart of the journey and make you want to close your eyes and be there. It would be far too presumptuous of me to even suggest that I do this, but I would be lying if I said it wasn’t my goal when I started typing a travel op onto my PC. OVERALL There is no right or wrong way to write an op on anything, providing you include all the relevant information and cover all the angles, and of course, that you have been to the places you write about. Each person must be encouraged to pursue the writing style that gives them so much pleasure to share, never put down for trying to please, and never judged for trying to help other people become better within. Follow the guidelines of your heart and let your mind write for you, and you will never ever have to se
nd me a postcard, for the picture will be clear from your writing skills. Thank you, and enjoy writing. Angus Reid 37 Aged in an oak casket, matured well past his years, and bottled for sale to ancient mariners like himself ;o)