Never Can Say Goodbye - Christina Jones
Pretty Dresses, Less Pretty Words - Never Can Say Goodbye - Christina Jones Fiction Book

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Pretty Dresses, Less Pretty Words
Never Can Say Goodbye - Christina Jones

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Never Can Say Goodbye - Christina Jones

Date: 18/02/12

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Advantages: Nice vintage descriptions

Disadvantages: As light and flitty as the stock.

When Frankie is unexpectedly handed the reins to the shop where she currently works, she's surprised to say the least. Current boss Rita is heading off for a new life (and love) in the sun, and leaving her home and business behind. It's a swift learning curve to go from shop assistant to business owner, but with her friends, and most of the village, behind her, Frankie's going to give it a shot.

Though previously a hire-and-return set-up, once rebranded Francesca's Fabulous Frocks becomes a vintage dress shop spanning various decades and the stock does sound stunning, though the speed with which the dresses are sourced prior to the grand opening seems a bit too swift, the whole process a bit too easy. Ditto the core concept of Rita upping sticks and simply leaving the business behind - it's a nice idea but the way the story tells it seems overly simplistic and, as such, irritatingly unrealistic. I'm not suggesting that a work of fiction should be based on fact, but I do like to be able to lose myself in a story and get swept away with what's happening, and I thought this one was a bit too out there for that to happen.

Kingston Dapple, the quiet Berkshire village in which the story is set, provides a good backdrop that allows you to believe in the village gossip and eccentric characters pertinent to the story, but it does beg the question of why the young uns haven't upped and left previously because there's not a whole lot going on for that generation. The arrival of dapper Dexter Valentine is explained by the fact he has a past he needs to escape, and there's a handy business for him to take over too, the local flower stall, but the others such as Lilly and Frankie herself don't really have this excuse and for all the claims of escaping heartbreak and humiliation elsewhere, I'm still not buying a small village as the place to do this when the anonymity of a big city seems so much more likely.

It wouldn't be chick lit without a splash of romance, and there's plenty here, but something seemed a bit off to me, and I wasn't as engaged with the characters as I might have been, barely caring whether or not they ended up together. There are plenty of quirky characters...perhaps too many, and I was left longing for some normality. The added twist of ghostly happenings exacerbated this - it felt like a step too far, as if the author was trying to introduce as many twists and turns as possible while a simple story about the shop would actually have been quite nice.

One thing you couldn't criticize about the book is the speed with which the story develops, as it certainly gets going early on and you're not left wondering when the mysteries will finally kick in. That said, I didn't find the writing was a slick as some, and it didn't immediately grab and engage me in the way the likes of or consistently do.

I don't mean to imply that it's a waste of a book because I did quite enjoy it, but was left disappointed because I felt it didn't achieve its full potential. It's perfectly passable as one of many books you're planning to read, but it's not the sort I would recommend as your only reading material on a long flight or train journey.

Out now.

This review first appeared on www.thebookbag.co.uk

Summary: Perfectly readable but not massively memorable