The Return of the Mack (The testament of Gideon Mack - James Robertson)

Member Name: The Duke

Product:	The testament of Gideon Mack - James Robertson
Date:	27/08/07 (171 review reads)
Rating:

Advantages: Great payoff at the end, excellent potential

Disadvantages: Misleading blurb on cover, never lives up to the potential

The beginning of the end of Gideon Mack's life starts when he notices a huge, ancient-looking standing stone in his local woods during one of his frequent cross country runs. Gideon Mack is convinced it wasn't there before. He tells his friends about this stone, but they are slightly sceptical. Giant stones don't simply appear out of thin air! However, he's not dismissed out of hand. You see, Gideon Mack is not your run of the mill church minister.

For starters, he doesn't believe in God, so he's a faithless minister. He was in a loveless marriage that ended early (due to an accidental fatality) and he's even coveted thy neighbour's ass, quite literally. Oh, and he believes he was saved from certain death by none other than the Devil himself. Unsurprisingly, most of the world takes a dim view of any person that claims to have met the Devil, but to announce this to the public as well as admit to quite a few other sins is probably not the wisest thing a fallen minister could do.

As if it wasn't already weird enough that he had disappeared into an underground river and returned three days later, largely unhurt, the mystery surrounding Gideon Mack increased when he simply disappeared at the end of 2003. No-one knew what had happened to him until one day his notes were discovered in a guest house by the landlady and shortly afterwards, his remains were found on Ben Alder.

With the exception of a prologue and conclusion by the book's publisher and the odd annotated explanation, it is these 'discovered notes' that form the basis of the book and are claimed to be entirely Mack's own work.

I didn't really get into the story that quickly. I thought it took too long to get to the point where Gideon Mack meets the Devil, with too much focus on the early part of his life. I felt that there was not enough of what happened after their meeting, especially given the amount of references to this meeting on the cover of the book.

In fact I was nearly two-thirds of the way through the story before I started enjoying Gideon Mack. At times the story does get quite ambiguous and I got confused. Did Gideon Mack really see the Devil? Is it simply a result of his ordeal of falling onto the underground river? Are there other reasons, from earlier in his life, why he might have conjured up such an illusion? Were there other reasons why this all happened? Did Gideon Mack pick the stories from his life because they were important in what eventually happened or was it reminiscing for the sake of reminiscence?

I can't really say that the book enthralled me because it was frustrating getting through so much preamble, but to its credit, finished well with a few interesting ideas. Overall though, I think it's a wasted opportunity, despite the obvious quality of the writing, because the aspect of the interaction between Gideon and the Devil and the subsequent events after his disappearance had plenty of potential to offer up an exciting tale. I'd read Douglas Coupland's 'Girlfriend in a Coma' which is not a million miles away in terms of concept and enjoyed that much more because the big event happens a lot sooner, giving full time for the concept to be explored fully, something that Gideon Mack lacks.

The early part of Mack's life is told well, despite not holding much interest for me. With the exception of Gideon Mack and the feisty Catherine Craigie, none of the other characters really struck a chord. I did think that some of them could have done with a little more flesh on their bones, too. People like Mack's best friends James and Elsie seemed rather two-dimensional for my tastes despite the close emotional bond between them. Reading through this part of Mack's life, I was reminded of Iain Banks' The Crow Road not in terms of characters but as a general vibe that I couldn't quite put my finger on.

The Devil, who turns out to be far from the stereotypical monster that you might expect, provides a lot to chew over. It's such a shame that his role is very much of a bit part player, albeit an important one and I thought the book gained a lot of life from the point where the two characters meet until Mack's disappearance and the subsequent conclusion. The ending was more reminiscent of the conclusion of an M. Night Shyamalan film such as The Sixth Sense or Signs where little snippets of seemingly worthless information are tied together to suggest something really strange has happened. Unlike those movies, I didn't enjoy the journey to the pay off as much as I might have done, but the ending itself was something I did quite enjoy. If I'd bought the book, I guess I'd be feeling slightly miffed at perhaps being misled by the blurb on the back of the book, but as I didn't pay for my copy, I'm prepared to be a little more lenient.

Summary: Fallen minister who doesn't believe in God, meets Devil.